I am like soil. I am moist meaning I am young and free. I have aspirations and feel free. I am free and cooperative. When a tree falls, people yell timber.
The problem with only have five sentences, especially sentences that kind of exist in isolation from each other without forming a story, it's hard to provide any serious commentary. It seems that this isn't a serious post--and by serious I don't mean mood or tone. I mean, I don't feel like you took the assignment seriously because I am having a hard time seeing your effort. Shape this, think of what you really want to say, expand a bit, and repost.
The problem with only have five sentences, especially sentences that kind of exist in isolation from each other without forming a story, it's hard to provide any serious commentary. It seems that this isn't a serious post--and by serious I don't mean mood or tone. I mean, I don't feel like you took the assignment seriously because I am having a hard time seeing your effort. Shape this, think of what you really want to say, expand a bit, and repost.
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